homework and tomorrow
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
I (last/see) him two days ago.
-> I last saw him two days ago.
He (not/be) at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business.
-> He was not at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business.
Where (she/go) for her holidays?
-> Where does she go for her holidys?
How long (it/take/you) to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?
-> How long does it take you to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?
My Freinds will come my house tomorrow.
So I have a lot to do.
First, I have to clean my house. There is a lot of dust in my house.
I never open the windows because of very cold.
After clean, I have to cook some side dishes.
Usually I did not cook and I'm not skilled in cook.
It takes more than an hour me to prepare vegetables, even.
Before, I cooked the tortillas.
I cooked it until 1 AM. It was mess in my kitchen.
I cried.
Anyway, my cook is not delicious.
It's not worth to try it.
I'm worring.
I hope to be happy my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Miss. [Name], thank you so much for dropping in your composition and at the same time doing your homework..
Cheer up Miss. [Name], we all know that cooking is not really easy,kkk..:)
I myself is not a good cook but we can learn that, so I\'m pretty sure that your friends will enjoy their stay in your house.
I\'ll see you again in class later Miss. [Name]..^^
Teacher Cam
HomeworkI (last/see) him two days ago. -> I last saw him two days ago.>>correct!He (not/be) at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business. -> He was not at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business.>>correct!Where (she/go) for her holidays? -> Where does she go for her holidys?>>correct!How long (it/take/you) to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?-> How long does it take you to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?>>correct!My Freinds will come my house tomorrow.
>>My friends will go to my house tomorrow.So I have a lot to do.
>>So I have to do a lot of things.First, I have to clean my house.
>>correct!
There is a lot of dust in my house.
>>correct!I never open the windows because of very cold.>>I never open the windows because it\'s very cold.After clean, I have to cook some side dishes.
>>After cleaning, I have to cook some foods.Usually I did not cook and I\'m not skilled in cook.
>>I usually don\'t cook and I\'m not a good cook.It takes more than an hour me to prepare vegetables, even.
>>It takes more than an hour for me to prepare the vegetables even.Before, I cooked the tortillas.
>>Before I made tortillas.I cooked it until 1 AM. It was mess in my kitchen.
>>I made it til 1 am in the kitchen was a mess.I cried.
>>correct!Anyway, my cook is not delicious.
>>Anyway, I dont cook well.It\'s not worth to try it.
>>It\'s not worth trying.I\'m worring.
>>I\'m worried about that.I hope to be happy my friends.
>>I hope my friends will be very happy.
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