homework and tomorrow

2012-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Homework I (last/see) him two days ago. -> I last saw him two days ago. He (not/be) at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business. -> He was not at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business. Where (she/go) for her holidays? -> Where does she go for her holidys? How long (it/take/you) to drive from Amsterdam to Paris? -> How long does it take you to drive from Amsterdam to Paris? My Freinds will come my house tomorrow. So I have a lot to do. First, I have to clean my house. There is a lot of dust in my house. I never open the windows because of very cold. After clean, I have to cook some side dishes. Usually I did not cook and I'm not skilled in cook. It takes more than an hour me to prepare vegetables, even. Before, I cooked the tortillas. I cooked it until 1 AM. It was mess in my kitchen. I cried. Anyway, my cook is not delicious. It's not worth to try it. I'm worring. I hope to be happy my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss. [Name], thank you so much for dropping in your composition and at the same time doing your homework.. Cheer up Miss. [Name], we all know that cooking is not really easy,kkk..:) I myself is not a good cook but we can learn that, so I\'m pretty sure that your friends will enjoy their stay in your house. I\'ll see you again in class later Miss. [Name]..^^ Teacher Cam   HomeworkI (last/see) him two days ago. -> I last saw him two days ago.>>correct!He (not/be) at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business. -> He was not at the meeting on Monday because he was away on business.>>correct!Where (she/go) for her holidays? -> Where does she go for her holidys?>>correct!How long (it/take/you) to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?-> How long does it take you to drive from Amsterdam to Paris?>>correct!My Freinds will come my house tomorrow. >>My friends will go to my house tomorrow.So I have a lot to do. >>So I have to do a lot of things.First, I have to clean my house. >>correct! There is a lot of dust in my house. >>correct!I never open the windows because of very cold.>>I never open the windows because it\'s very cold.After clean, I have to cook some side dishes. >>After cleaning, I have to cook some foods.Usually I did not cook and I\'m not skilled in cook. >>I usually don\'t cook and I\'m not a good cook.It takes more than an hour me to prepare vegetables, even. >>It takes more than an hour for me to prepare the vegetables even.Before, I cooked the tortillas. >>Before I made tortillas.I cooked it until 1 AM. It was mess in my kitchen. >>I made it til 1 am in the kitchen was a mess.I cried. >>correct!Anyway, my cook is not delicious. >>Anyway, I dont cook well.It\'s not worth to try it. >>It\'s not worth trying.I\'m worring. >>I\'m worried about that.I hope to be happy my friends. >>I hope my friends will be very happy.  

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