Homework and writing

Hi, [이름]!

Indeed, I had a good time during the holiday.

How about you? ^^

Let\'s talk about your Thanksgiving day tomorrow.

I guess you had a great holiday with your family.

Thank you for sending me a composition and for answering your homework. 

Here is the correction I made. ^^

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

Hello, Dianne!

>> correct
 Did you have a good time for a long holiday?

>> Did you have a good time on the long holiday?
 I just spent time with family in house without nothing special.

>>  I just spent time with my family in the house without nothing special.
 Here is my homework and writing.

>> correct

please check them~

>> Please check them.

1. b

>> correct
 2. b (but I think both is ok....no??? )

>> a. play (because it\'s a usual thing you do every week)
3. b

>> correct
 4. b

>> correct
 5. a

>> correct

It has been almost 2 years i stayed in Japen. 

>> It has been almost 2 years now that I\'m staying in Japan.

 My husband and I have agonized and deliberated which school is good for our children when we got here for the first time.

>> correct

We decided to send first child to the international school without hesitation because he has ever studied english in English kindergarten and he was accustomed to use it. Besides We though He need to learn english more deeply to go studying to USA in future becuase He has US nationality.

>> We decided to send our first child to an international school without hesitation because he has been learning English since kindergarten and he was accustomed to use it. Besides, we thought that he needs to learn English more deeply for him to prepare to study in the USA in the future because he has an American citizenship.

 On the other hand, second child has never learn english until now and she didn\'t has US nationality like him.

>> On the other hand, my second child has never learned English until now and she doesn\'t have an American citizenship like him.
 So we thought she will be better to study japenese first and start english 2~3 years later.

>>  So we thought that it would be better for her to study Japanese first and start learning English 2~3 years later.

That was why we sent her to the Japen kindergaten and hem to the international school.

>> That was why we sent her to a kindergarten in Japan and my son to an international school.