Homework and writing
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing about the father of Nathan\'s friend.
Well, it is still better if he can balance his time between family and work.
I guess, your husband is on this. ^^
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Hello, Dianne.
>> correct
Can you please revise a homework and my writing?
>> Can you please revise the homework and my writing?
>> or: Can you please check my homework and my writing?
1. correclty
>> correctly
>> He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct.
2. quickly
>> She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.
3. exactly
>> He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.
4. awful
>> The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still.
5 .dangerous
>> It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous.
One dad of Nathan\'s friends is a laywer.
>> One dad of Nathan\'s friends is a lawyer. (spelling of lawyer)
He is extremly busy and it seems that he doesn\'t have afford to trip with his family many times.
>> He is extremely busy and it seems that he cannot afford to have a trip with his family many times.
>> or: He is extremely busy and it seems that he doesn\'t have much time to go on a trip with his family many times.
I have never seen this kind of person who is as busy as my husband.
>> correct
>>or: I have never seen a person who is busy like my husband.
I heard sometimes his family depressed not to trip with him when they want to go. But He is skillful to earn money to spend it without any thinking.
>> I heard that sometimes his family is depressed when they can\'t go on a trip with him when they want to go, but he is skillful to earn money and spend it without worrying.
I think there is no free in the world.
>> I think nothing is free in this world.
thank you.
>> Thank you.
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