Homework and writing

2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Dianne. Can you please revise a homework and my writing? 1. correclty 2. quickly 3. exactly 4. awful 5 .dangerous One dad of Nathan's friends is a laywer. He is extremly busy and it seems that he doesn't have afford to trip with his family many times. I have never seen this kind of person who is as busy as my husband. I heard sometimes his family depressed not to trip with him when they want to go. But He is skillful to earn money to spend it without any thinking. I think there is no free in the world. thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing about the father of Nathan\'s friend.

Well, it is still better if he can balance his time between family and work.

I guess, your husband is on this. ^^

See you tomorrow!


_Teacher Dianne ^^



Hello, Dianne.

>> correct
 Can you please revise a homework and my writing?

>>  Can you please revise the homework and my writing?

>>  or: Can you please check my homework and my writing?

 1. correclty

>> correctly

>> He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct.
 2. quickly

>> She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.
 3. exactly

>> He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.
 4. awful

>> The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still.
 5 .dangerous

>> It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous.  


One dad of Nathan\'s friends is a laywer. 

>> One dad of Nathan\'s friends is a lawyer. (spelling of lawyer)
 He is extremly busy and it seems that he doesn\'t have afford to trip with his family many times.

>>  He is extremely busy and it seems that he cannot afford to have a trip with his family many times.

>> or:  He is extremely busy and it seems that he doesn\'t have much time to go on a trip with his family many times.

I have never seen this kind of person who is as busy as my husband.

>> correct

>>or: I have never seen a person who is busy like my husband.


I heard sometimes his family depressed not to trip with him when they want to go. But He is skillful to earn money to spend it without any thinking.

>> I heard that sometimes his family is depressed when they can\'t go on a trip with him when they want to go, but he is skillful to earn money and spend it without worrying.


 I think there is no free in the world. 

>> I think nothing is free in this world. 

thank you.

>> Thank you.

 

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·