Homework : Are goals necessary to achieve success?

Hi Allen!

I\'m happy that you are still pushing through your quest to improve your writing skills.

I think it;s admirable that you are making the effort to develop yourself.

I know that there are times when you are not satisfied with the rate of your progress.

However, you never give up and that is why I\'m sure that you can achieve anything you put your mind into.

Please don\'t ever change.

I\'ll see you in class!

~~ Teacher Sharon

There are several ways to achieve success.

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Some people believe that setting goals might struggle success differently to original purposes.

>>  Some people believe that setting goals might hinder success which is different from their original purpose.
However, I think that setting goals are essential for success.

>>  However, I think that setting goals is essential for success.
In this essay, I will talk about why goals are needed.

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First of all, a whole procedure should be divided into each stage.

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These divided processes would provide exact plans to go to the finish line.

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In addition, amount of efforts that we will do would decrease through this approach.

>>  In addition, efforts that we have to exert would decrease through this approach.
Secondly, setting goals would motivate people who want to get achievement.

>> Secondly, setting goals would motivate people who want to achieve something important.
When they meet the goals for each process, most people would focus on their goals.

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It’s more effective to set specific goals compare with an ambiguous target known as “success”.

>>  It’s more effective to set specific goals rather than work for an ambiguous target known as “success”.

Last but not least, I’m sure that these efforts are one of the best ways to get achievement.

>> Last but not the least, I’m sure that these efforts are one of the best ways to achieve our dreams.
There are several well-known approaches in the world such as the design of architecture.

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If we set right goals, we can easily achieve success that we want.

>>  If we set right goals, we can easily achieve the success that we want.