Homework : Are people in your country generally close to their families?

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There are different types of location between children and parents.

>> There are different living situations that children and parents follow.
Some people live in the place around their parents, but others live far from them.

>> Some people live in a place near their parents\' home, but others live far from them.
In this essay, I will talk about both opinions and explain my arguments.

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First of all, some couples inevitably make the decision where they live near their families.

>> Correct
There are several reasons why they should live in there.

>> There are several reasons why they want to live near their parents.
This is because that they need help to do something such as caring children, cooking and so on.

>> It could be because they need help in caring for the children, cooking and so on.
Secondly, others want to independence from their parents.

>> On the other hand, other people want to be independent from their parents.
a few women don’t want to meet their parents in law.

>> A few women don’t want to live near their parents-in-law.
This is a cultural trend now named the problems between wives and mothers in law.

>> This is a cultural trend which refers to the problems between wives and mothers-in-law.
So they want to avoid these problems.

>> They want to avoid these problems.

It causes that they live in other places from their parents.

>> This causes them to live in other places far from their parents.
For these reasons, there are different types of where they live in.

>> For these reasons, there are different types of living situations.
This is one of modern society’s changes.

>> This is one of the effects of modern society.
So we try to adapt this situation.

>> We must really try to adapt to this situation.