HOMEWORK: Are you a moody person? Do you know anyone who is?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think myself as somewhat sensitive person, but I\'m not very moody person. I think a moody personality doesn\'t have any good aspect. When someone around me shows moody reactions, I feel overwhelmed and tired. I can\'t expect such person\'s condition and mood exactly because their feelings are spontaneous. I\'d like to mingle with friends who are thoughtful and patient, rather than who are moody and self-centered. Also, I will try not to be moody in front of people.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for giving a very honest, reflective view on how moodiness affects relationships. It is so true that unpredictable moods can make people around us feel overwhelmed and tired. Nice work explaining!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think myself as somewhat sensitive person, but I\'m not very moody person.
~ I think of myself as a somewhat sensitive person, but I\'m not a very moody person.
I think a moody personality doesn\'t have any good aspect.
~ I think a moody personality doesn\'t have any good aspects.
When someone around me shows moody reactions, I feel overwhelmed and tired.
~ When people around me act moody, I feel overwhelmed and tired.
I can\'t expect such person\'s condition and mood exactly because their feelings are spontaneous.
~ I can\'t predict that kind of person\'s mood because their feelings are so unpredictable.
I\'d like to mingle with friends who are thoughtful and patient, rather than who are moody and self-centered.
~ CORRECT.
Also, I will try not to be moody in front of people.
~ Also, I will try my best not to show my moods in front of others.
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