HOMEWORK: As a teenager, what do you think you can contribute to society?
학생이 쓴 원문
As a teenager, I think I can contribute many thing to society.
I think we should do simple things first.
For example, picking up the trash in the park is contribution that teenagers can make to society.
And I volunteer to help some disabled people in my mother\'s company every month for the social contribution.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
I think we should do simple things first.
For example, picking up the trash in the park is contribution that teenagers can make to society.
And I volunteer to help some disabled people in my mother\'s company every month for the social contribution.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
As a teenager, I think I can contribute many thing to society.
>> CORRECT!
I think we should do simple things first.
>> CORRECT!
For example, picking up the trash in the park is contribution that teenagers can make to society.
>> For example, picking up the trash in the park is a contribution that teenagers can make to society.
And I volunteer to help some disabled people in my mother\'s company every month for the social contribution.
>> CORRECT!
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