Homework assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher, I hope you enjoyed your long weekend! ^^
Did you have rejuvanating time?
I had a lot going on during the Seollal. I made Korean traditional dumplings and fried pancakes with my relatives on Saturday. I would say that family gathering was all good but the cleaning up process was a trouble. ^^ Well, I had a fabulous holiday.
강사 첨삭
I did have a super rejuvenating time. Though, I felt the holiday was too short or rather, time flew by so fast and it was over too soon. Nonetheless, I lied down on bed for several hours doing nothing. I think that\'s the best part about my holiday, just lying down and being lazy all day long. ^^ Talk later!
T. Aurora
Hi teacher, I hope you enjoyed your long weekend! ^^
>>Correct!Did you have rejuvanating time?>>Correct!I had a lot going on during the Seollal.
>>Correct!
I made Korean traditional dumplings and fried pancakes with my relatives on Saturday.
>> I made Korean traditional dumplings and fried pancakes with my relatives lastSaturday.
I would say that family gathering was all good but the cleaning up process was a trouble. ^^
>>I would say that our family gathering was all good but the cleaning up process was a trouble. ^^
Well, I had a fabulous holiday.
>>Correct!
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