Homework (Aug 27)
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise:
Have you ever used the Internet? What did you use it for? Explain your answer.
Answer:
I usually use internet for watching the YouTube. Because I can get many information at there.
And I also ues it for read a news and shopping too.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jun!
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I usually use internet for watching the YouTube.
>> I usually use the internet to watch YouTube.
Because I can get many information at there.
>> It\'s because I can get a lot of information by using it.
And I also ues it for read a news and shopping too.
>> Also, I use it for reading the news and shopping, too.
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