homework August 19th
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with that.
If they were very poor , i want to be a rich.
If they have bad relationship with family,
I want to have good relationship so. I think they are our teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi there M\'AM [이름]!
Our parents are our first teachers. They taught us how to walk, speak, eat, read, and have good manners.
More than any other people, our parents are the most involved in our development and education.
Also, they become our mirror so we know what to do or not to do in our lives. Thus, almost for sure, our parents are
the best teachers.
~Teacher Shanee
I agree with that.
>>> Correct!If they were very poor , i want to be a rich.
>>> If they were very poor, I would want to be rich.If they have bad relationship with family, I want to have good relationship so.
>>> If they had a bad relationship with their family members, I would want to have a good relationship.
I think they are our teacher.
>>> Correct!
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