homework August 31th
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite place is coffee shop.
we called "caffee".
sometimes, I read abook, meet my friend,searching for internet at there.
because I like coffee and music.
I usually go there twice a week.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for sharing something about your favorite place Ma\'am [이름]!
I made some corrections with your sentences below. Ma\'am, always remember to capitalize the beginning of your sentence.
Also, capitalize the first letter of a proper noun.
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee
My favorite place is coffee shop.
>>> My favorite place is a coffee shop.we called \"caffee\".
>>> We call it \"Caffee\".sometimes, I read abook, meet my friend,searching for internet at there.
>>> Sometimes I read a book, meet my friend, and browse Internet there.because I like coffee and music. I usually go there twice a week.
>>> Because I like coffee and music, I usually go there twice a week.
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