HOMEWORK~!! B)
학생이 쓴 원문
1.
I think it\'s hard to protect red pandas by people with reckless greed. Because red pandas is very cute. So people want the leather of red pandas. They think rare animals have beautiful leather. But this is a very cruel idea. So We have to understand about the beautiful values of animals. Lastly, There is a saying in Korea for dead animals \'sorry as a person\'
2.
There were many extinct animals in Korea. Among them, there were tigers in Korea. But when it was the Japanese colonial period, Japanese people felt danger by Korean tigers. So Japanese soldiers killed the all Korean tigers. Ultimately, Korea didn\'t have power to protect them. So now Korea has made natural monument number for endangered animals and it is illegal to catch or kill them.
Lastly, we have to make them to live well in nature
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
I think it\'s hard to protect red pandas by people with reckless greed.
>>I think it\'s hard to protect red pandas from greedy people.
Because red pandas is very cute.
>>Because red pandas are very cute.
So people want the leather of red pandas.
>>CORRECT!
They think rare animals have beautiful leather.
>>CORRECT!
But this is a very cruel idea.
>>CORRECT!
So We have to understand about the beautiful values of animals.
>>So, we have to understand about the beautiful values of animals.
Lastly, There is a saying in Korea for dead animals \'sorry as a person\'
>>Lastly, there is a saying in Korea for dead animals \'sorry as a person\'.
>>Lastly, there is a saying in Korea for dead animals \'sorry as a person\'.
There were many extinct animals in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
Among them, there were tigers in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
But when it was the Japanese colonial period, Japanese people felt danger by Korean tigers.
>>CORRECT!
So Japanese soldiers killed the all Korean tigers.
>>So, Japanese soldiers killed all the Korean tigers.
Ultimately, Korea didn\'t have power to protect them.
>>CORRECT!
So now Korea has made natural monument number for endangered animals and it is illegal to catch or kill them.
>>CORRECT!
Lastly, we have to make them to live well in nature
Lastly, we have to make them to live well in nature
>>CORRECT!
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