Homework-bearing the brunt of TOEFL.

2016-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Yes, I have ever experienced “ bearing the brunt of TOEFL. When I apply to exchange student to U.S.A. I had to take a TOEFL test. I went to academy to learn and study it for months. At that time, I was getting tired and exhausted of it. Because it was too hard and difficult for me. And I thought that there is no progress of study. And I tried to change other way to study in U.S.A. At that moment, my older brother persuaded me to keep studying TOEFL. Thanks to him, I tried again and got a best score to apply to exchange student program. Finally I succeeded to study for one semester in U.S.A. It was best memory for me.

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Hi there my dear [이름]!Thank you so much for doing a great job!I commend you for a job well done... I can\'t wait to hear your voice again... Take care and have a good night... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Yes, I have ever experienced “ bearing the brunt of TOEFL. >>correctWhen I apply to exchange student to U.S.A. I had to take a TOEFL test. >>When I applied as an exchange student in the US I had to take the TOEFL test.I went to academy to learn and study it for months. >>I went to an academy to learn and study for months. At that time, I was getting tired and exhausted of it. >>correctBecause it was too hard and difficult for me. >>correct And I thought that there is no progress of study. >>correct OR: I thought there was no progress in studying.And I tried to change other way to study in U.S.A. >>And I tried to change my way of studying in the US. At that moment, my older brother persuaded me to keep studying TOEFL. >>correct Thanks to him, I tried again and got a best score to apply to exchange student program. >>Thanks to him, I tried again and got a very good score in applying for the exchange student program.Finally I succeeded to study for one semester in U.S.A. >>correct It was best memory for me. >>It was my best memory.  

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