Homework-bearing the brunt of TOEFL.
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Yes, I have ever experienced “ bearing the brunt of TOEFL.
When I apply to exchange student to U.S.A. I had to take a TOEFL test.
I went to academy to learn and study it for months. At that time, I was getting tired and exhausted of it.
Because it was too hard and difficult for me. And I thought that there is no progress of study.
And I tried to change other way to study in U.S.A. At that moment, my older brother persuaded me to keep studying TOEFL. Thanks to him, I tried again and got a best score to apply to exchange student program.
Finally I succeeded to study for one semester in U.S.A. It was best memory for me.
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Yes, I have ever experienced “ bearing the brunt of TOEFL.
>>correctWhen I apply to exchange student to U.S.A. I had to take a TOEFL test.
>>When I applied as an exchange student in the US I had to take the TOEFL test.I went to academy to learn and study it for months.
>>I went to an academy to learn and study for months.
At that time, I was getting tired and exhausted of it.
>>correctBecause it was too hard and difficult for me.
>>correct
And I thought that there is no progress of study.
>>correct
OR: I thought there was no progress in studying.And I tried to change other way to study in U.S.A.
>>And I tried to change my way of studying in the US.
At that moment, my older brother persuaded me to keep studying TOEFL.
>>correct
Thanks to him, I tried again and got a best score to apply to exchange student program.
>>Thanks to him, I tried again and got a very good score in applying for the exchange student program.Finally I succeeded to study for one semester in U.S.A.
>>correct
It was best memory for me.
>>It was my best memory.
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