Homework both yesterday and today
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I think parents have to do responsibilities all of substantial part for child. Because their child is student like me, they can’t do complete self own feet. So before they get a job, parents support them.
Calling with friends makes me happy. Because when I have a worry and I say it to friends, something feel calm me down. And another way is that I sing aloud Kpop.
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Thank you for answering the questions, Rosie! ^^ I\'m glad to also see you use the word \"substantial\" in your composition. :)
~ T.Harmony <3
>> I think parents have responsibilities which are substantial to the life of their child.
Because their child is student like me, they can’t do complete self own feet.
>> Since their child might be a student like me, they cannot stand on their own feet.
So before they get a job, parents support them.
>> So before they become working adults, parents should continue to support them.
Calling with friends makes me happy.
Calling with friends makes me happy.
>> Having a call with my friends makes me happy.
Because when I have a worry and I say it to friends, something feel calm me down.
>> Because every time I feel worried, I would just open up to my friends and I\'d feel a lot better.
And another way is that I sing aloud Kpop.
>> Another thing I do is I sing K-pop [이름]s aloud.
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