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2020-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. To touch animals is dangerous because we can\'t read their thoughts and actions perfectly. Especially wild animals are unreadable. They can defend themselves and they can attack someone who touches them or comes them. If they were as dogs or pets, you should ask their owner if you can touch dogs or pets. It\'s a necessary manner. Because they are almost timid, therefore they can attack you if you touch them carelessly. 2. I\'m afraid of animals bigger than me. And I\'m afraid of animals which have a scary face. One day, when I was walking in park, dog which bigger than me was coming to me. So I had avoided to a building. I don\'t know why I\'m afraid of them and I don\'t know where come a reason. I think it\'s just that they\'re very threatening.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

To touch animals is dangerous because we can\'t read their thoughts and actions perfectly.
>>CORRECT!
Especially wild animals are unreadable.
>>CORRECT!
They can defend themselves and they can attack someone who touches them or comes them.
>>They can defend themselves and they can attack someone who touches them or comes to them.
If they were as dogs or pets, you should ask their owner if you can touch dogs or pets.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s a necessary manner.
>>CORRECT!
Because they are almost timid, therefore they can attack you if you touch them carelessly.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m afraid of animals bigger than me.
>>CORRECT!
And I\'m afraid of animals which have a scary face.
>>CORRECT!
One day, when I was walking in park, dog which bigger than me was coming to me.
>>CORRECT!
So I had avoided to a building.
>>So I had avoided it running to a building.
I don\'t know why I\'m afraid of them and I don\'t know where come a reason.
>>I don\'t know why I\'m afraid of them and I don\'t know the reason of my fear.
I think it\'s just that they\'re very threatening.
>>CORRECT!

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