HOMEWORK: Can you talk about four places you would like to go on vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I would like to go to Sokcho on vacation because of the beautiful sea.
Second, I would like to go to Chuncheon.
Because chicken ribs in Chuncheon are delicious.
Third, I would like to go to Jeju.
Because I want to eat black pork.
Lastly, I would like to go to Andong.
Because I want to go to Andong Hahoe Village.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
Because chicken ribs in Chuncheon are delicious.
Third, I would like to go to Jeju.
Because I want to eat black pork.
Lastly, I would like to go to Andong.
Because I want to go to Andong Hahoe Village.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
First, I would like to go to Sokcho on vacation because of the beautiful sea.
>> First, I would like to go to Sokcho on vacation because of its beautiful sea.
Second, I would like to go to Chuncheon.
>> CORRECT!
Because chicken ribs in Chuncheon are delicious.
>> CORRECT!
Third, I would like to go to Jeju.
>> CORRECT!
Because I want to eat black pork.
>> CORRECT!
Lastly, I would like to go to Andong.
>> CORRECT!
Because I want to go to Andong Hahoe Village.
>> CORRECT!
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