Homework(childhood dream)

Hi [이름]! I didn\'t know that you have that sense of humor! ^^

I look forward to hear some jokes from you. lol

~~May~~

Many children always have lots of dreams. Such dreams become goals in their life and joys in themselves.

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so adults sometimes ask children the following questions. \" What kinds of dream are you dreaming?

>> So adults sometimes ask children the following questions, \" What kinds of dream are you dreaming of?\"

or What do you want to be when you grow into adult?\".

>> or \"What do you want to be when you grow up?\".

Most of children are likely to talk about familiar jobs they\'ve seen and heard a lot.
When I was young, I had a dream to be a comedian. One of my favorite comedians was Charlie Chaplin.

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The effect on my dream came from television comedy programs and movies.

>> My dream has influenced by comedy programs and movies that I watch.

Humor made life fun and people happy.

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In other words, I felt that humor was l9ike a river running on the ground. 

>> In other words, I felt that humor was like a river flowing. 
Hence, the job as a comedian came to me as a great attraction in that it could give people happiness and laughter like the river that makes the land fertile.

>> Hence, working as a comedian came to me as a great motivation that could give people happiness and laughter like the river that makes the land fertile.

Of course, my dream has changed now, but sometimes my talent that makes a laugh between my friends and family is still alive as my childhood dream~!!

>> Of course, my dream has changed now, but sometimes I have my sense of humor that makes my friends and family laugh which has been my childhood dream!