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2012-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Lucy has a dog. 2) Let's sing a song. 3) Emily needs a new desk in her room. 4) I need a blue pen. 5) Ben has an old bike. 6) Peter has an aunt in Berlin. 7) We listen to an English CD. 8) She has an exercise book in her school bag. 9) The speed of this car was 160 miles a hour. 10) They finished a unit. hello good morning! sorry teacher, last night i was really tired. so,i didn't do my homework. actually, i didn't study english grammar on textbook, after when i graduate my high shcool. when i was in austailia just learned english from my foreign friend's. asked to them many question after listen they's english. further, i felt my english skill getting worst. bcz really long time didn't use. anyway thank you for your teaching and really have fun study with you! see you soon! [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi, JT.I am so pleased that you have done well in your homework. I hope you are not feeling tired today. Have you been drinking again?Don\'t give up, JT. I know you are a promising student. You have the ability to speak clearly. I think, all we need to do is to practice everyday. I will rememind you about some rules about grammar if you are not really into books, okay? For now, you have to believe in yourself like I believe in you.Remember this:\"A /AN\" is used to refer to a non-specific or non-particular member of the group. For example, \"I would like to go see a movie.\" Here, we\'re not talking about a specific movie. We\'re talking about any movie. There are many movies, and I want to see any movie. I don\'t have a specific one in mind. When you have a single, countable English noun, you must always have an article before it.Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:1) Lucy has a dog. >>Correct2) Let\'s sing a song. >>Correct3) Emily needs a new desk in her room. >>Correct4) I need a blue pen. >>Correct5) Ben has an old bike. >>Correct6) Peter has an aunt in Berlin. >>Correct7) We listen to an English CD.>>Correct 8) She has an exercise book in her school bag. >>Correct9) The speed of this car was 160 miles a hour. >>9) The speed of this car was 160 miles an hour. 10) They finished a unit.>>Correcthello good morning!>>Hello, good morning!sorry teacher, last night i was really tired.>>Sorry, teacher. Last night, I was really tired.so,i didn\'t do my homework.>>So,I didn\'t do my homework.actually, i didn\'t study english grammar on textbook, after when i graduate my high shcool.>>Actually, I didn\'t study English grammar on textbook, after I graduated high shcool.when i was in austailia just learned english from my foreign friend\'s.>>When I was in Austalia, I just learned English from my foreign friends.asked to them many question after listen they\'s english.>>Asked to them many questions after listening to them.further, i felt my english skill getting worst.>>Furthermore, I felt my English skill is getting worst.bcz really long time didn\'t use.>>Because I haven\'t really used it for a long time.anyway thank you for your teaching and really have fun study with you!>>Anyway, thank you for teaching me and I really have fun studying with you!see you soon!>>See you soon![이름]

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