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What is the meaning of the word \" communication\"? It means that communicate with each other.In other words, we give or exchange some information, signals, or messages as by talk, gestures, or writing. so one of the most worrying things when we go to a new place is language. In my case, when I was going to go abroad for the first time, I worried about what to do if I don\'t talk well there.
But I changed my mind rather than my worry to the following. Even if language is different, human lifestyles and emotions are similar. sometimes on TV, I can see children from different countries and they easily become friends without speaking over time. so I was not afraid to go abroad, and I experienced the situation myself.
A few years ago, In my case, I have been to Montreal and Quebec. At first, I was embarrassed. I didn\'t speak French very well, but I came forward with courage. As a result, I could communicate there, too. Of course, I had to use the dictionary, but it was a good memory~.
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your experiences. I appreciate your effort in writing.
Yes, I agree. We have different languages but we are all equal.
I have also been to China and Japan and it was a little difficult because
not all people there can understand and speak English. These days, lots of apps
have been created and there are other ways to communicate with another.
By the way, please check some corrections below. In general, your sentences are great. ^^
~~May~~
What is the meaning of the word \" communication\"?>> CORRECT
It means that communicate with each other.
>> It means \"to communicate with each other\".
In other words, we give or exchange some information, signals, or messages as by talk, gestures, or writing.
>> In other words, we give or exchange some information, signals, or messages verbally, by gestures, or writing.
so one of the most worrying things when we go to a new place is language.
>> CORRECT
In my case, when I was going to go abroad for the first time, I worried about what to do if I don\'t talk well there.
>> In my case, when I went abroad for the first time, I worried about what to do if I don\'t talk well there.
But I changed my mind rather than my worry to the following.
>> But I rather changed my mind than to worry.
Even if language is different, human lifestyles and emotions are similar.
>> Even if we have different languages, human lifestyles and emotions are similar.
sometimes on TV, I can see children from different countries and they easily become friends without speaking over time.
>> CORRECT
Or >> Sometimes, I see children from different countries on TV and they easily become friends without talking to each other.
so I was not afraid to go abroad, and I experienced the situation myself.
>> CORRECT
A few years ago, In my case, I have been to Montreal and Quebec.
A few years ago, In my case, I have been to Montreal and Quebec.
>> A few years ago, I have been to Montreal and Quebec.
At first, I was embarrassed.
I didn\'t speak French very well, but I came forward with courage.
As a result, I could communicate there, too. Of course, I had to use the dictionary, but it was a good memory~.
>> CORRECT
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