Homework & composition
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Homework
1.I don't like smoking. (not/like)
2.How many languages do you know ? (you/know)
3. Where do you stay? (you/stay)
4.What are you doing at the park? (you/do)
5.I don't believe that you are a CEO.(not/believe)
Composition
I went to the hospital last Saturday.
I have a wart in my forefinger.
It's a painful to me. and it grows bigger.
I guess a doctor use laser treatment.
I was afraid of that.
Fortunately, the doctor didn't use laser.
Because, My wart laid close by nail.
The doctor said laser treatment could not be grown my nail.
Instead, the doctor use liquid nitrogen spray.
liquid nitrogen is minus 200 degrees Centigrade.
That is very cold.
So It was too painful that I thought it was a laser.
Now, My wart under skin turns black.
It is a sign that my wart is already getting better.
The wart will be scab in three days.
Maybe the scab will come off in a week.
But a wart can reoccur. So I could get the treatment again.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], a wonderful Tuesday to you my dear!
Thank you so much for dropping in your composition my dear, job well done!
I hope you would continue writing on our composition board..^^
Anyway, I made some modifications on your composition. Please read and study them Miss. [Name]..:)
Thank you once again and talk to you again later my dear..Teacher Cam^^
Homework1.I don\'t like smoking. (not/like)>>correct!2.How many languages do you know ? (you/know)>>correct!3. Where do you stay? (you/stay)>>correct!4.What are you doing at the park? (you/do)>>correct!5.I don\'t believe that you are a CEO.(not/believe)>>correct!CompositionI went to the hospital last Saturday.
>>correct!I have a wart in my forefinger.
>>correct!It\'s a painful to me. and it grows bigger.
>>It\'s very painful to me and it\'s even getting bigger.I guess a doctor use laser treatment.
>>I thought the doctor would use laser to treat this.I was afraid of that.
>>correct!Fortunately, the doctor didn\'t use laser.
>>correct!Because, My wart laid close by nail.
>>Because my wart was laid close to my nail.The doctor said laser treatment could not be grown my nail.
>>The doctor told me that laser would inhibit the gorwth of my nail.Instead, the doctor use liquid nitrogen spray.
>>Instead, the doctor used liquid nitrogen spray.liquid nitrogen is minus 200 degrees Centigrade.
>>Liquid nitrogen spray\'s temperature is negative 200 degrees centigrade.That is very cold.
>>correct!So It was too painful that I thought it was a laser.
>>correct!Now, My wart under skin turns black.
>>Now my wart turned black.It is a sign that my wart is already getting better.
>>correct!The wart will be scab in three days.
>>The wart will scab in 3 days.Maybe the scab will come off in a week.
>>correct!But a wart can reoccur. So I could get the treatment again.
>>correct!
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