homework D 2/1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HI JI!!
How did you spend your weekend? I will see you soon in my class.
T. DON
If you were given the chance to live in a different country, which country would you want to live?
Actually I didn\'t have a idea of abroad life because I have a plan to go to my countryside with my family during my elder period
>> Actually, I didn\'t have any idea about life in abroad because I have a plan to settle down in a country side with my family when I\'m old.
I was born in jeju island located southern area of korea and still lived my mother
>> I was born in Jeju Island located in the Southern area of Korea where my mother still lives up to this day.
It is a really beautiful island that have originally various natural environments so I grew having tendency to like purely nature
>> I grew up in a place where a beautiful island has various natural resources.
If I have a chance to live in a different country, I will choose the county that have a natural surroundings Like Newzeland.
>> If I have a chance to live in a different country, I will choose the county that has natural surroundings Like New Zealand.
I had a few knowledge about Newzeland, but exectly there is pure nature
>> I have a few knowledge about New Zealand but the best thing about the country is the beautiful nature.
so I hope to go there as soon as possible.
>> CORRECT
However. firstly, I have to study hard english for near future.
>> However, I have to study English very hard for my future.
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