Homework :D!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Definitely YES!! There is even a book named 'Whale Done!: The Power of Positive Relationships.' I was surprised that the name of the book is different in Korea. In Korea, the book is called 'Praising makes even a whale dance'. I think praising have many good influences on people. And it also applies to me. Your everyday positive and encouraging comments makes me get more confident in speaking English. Haha :) I think that people try to be better by listening compliments.
However I agree with the idea that praising also has bad effects. For example, some people could be
full of conceit and too much praising sounds untrue.
In conclusion, it's always good to do everything moderate!! Hahaha :)
I wish you have deep& sweet sleep on this weekend which we could do in week days!! : D !!! Have a wonderful weekend!! :D
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
Happy Monday! I am looking forward to hearing your voice again!
How has your weekend been! Thanks for appreciating my positivity in the morning!
I hope it was well spent!
Anyways, see you!
Definitely YES!! There is even a book named \'Whale Done!: The Power of Positive Relationships.\'
>>Definitely YES!! There is even a book titled, \'Whale Done!: The Power of Positive Relationships.\'
I was surprised that the name of the book is different in Korea.
>> I was surprised that it has a different title in Korea.
In Korea, the book is called \'Praising makes even a whale dance\'.
>>In Korea, the book is called \'Praising Even Makes a Whale Dance\'.
I think praising have many good influences on people.
>>I think praising has many good influences on people.
And it also applies to me.
>>CORRECT!
Your everyday positive and encouraging comments makes me get more confident in speaking English.
>>CORRECT! (I am so touched! That\'s so sweet of you!)
Haha :) I think that people try to be better by listening compliments. >> Haha :) I think that people try to be better by listening to compliments. However I agree with the idea that praising also has bad effects.
>>However, I agree on the idea that praising also has bad effects.
For example, some people could be full of conceit and too much praising sounds untrue.>>CORRECT!
>>For instance, some people could be conceited and too much flattery sounds untrue.In conclusion, it\'s always good to do everything moderate!! Hahaha :)>>In conclusion, it\'s always good to do everything in moderation!! Hahaha :)
>>In conclusion, it\'s always good to do everything moderately!! Hahaha :)I wish you have deep& sweet sleep on this weekend which we could do in week days!!
>>I wish you will have a deep & sweet sleep on this weekend which we could never do on weekdays!!
: D !!! Have a wonderful weekend!! :D
>>CORRECT!
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