Homework :D

2011-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 judy

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Ms. [Name]! I did my homework although I was so busy preparing the coming interview :) 1. (when / was/ built/ this house) Answer: When was this house built? 2. (how/cheese/is/made) How is cheese made? 3. (when/ invented / the computer/ was) When was the computer invented? 4. (Why/ Sue/ working / isn't / today) Why isn't Sue working today? 5. (what time/ coming/ your friends/ are) What time are your friends coming? 6. (why / was / cancelled/ the concert) Why was the concert cancelled? 7. (where/ your mother/ was / born) Where was your mother born? 8. (why/ you / to the party/ didn't / come) Why didn't you come to the party? 9. (how/ the accident / did/ happen) How did the accident happen? 10. (why / this machine / doesn't / work) Why doesn't this machine work? I can't sure that this homework is correct or not. Always thank you, Ms.Aurora!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition and doing your homework. It's all correct. Just keep up the good work. Have a nice day! T. Aurora Here are my corrections:   Good evening, Ms. [Name]!>> CorrectI did my homework although I was so busy preparing the coming interview :) >> I did my homework although I was so busy preparing for my interview :)1. (when / was/ built/ this house) Answer: When was this house built? >>Correct2. (how/cheese/is/made) How is cheese made? >> Correct3. (when/ invented / the computer/ was) When was the computer invented? >> Correct4. (Why/ Sue/ working / isn\'t / today) Why isn\'t Sue working today? >> Correct5. (what time/ coming/ your friends/ are) What time are your friends coming? >> Correct6. (why / was / cancelled/ the concert) Why was the concert cancelled? >> Correct7. (where/ your mother/ was / born) Where was your mother born? >> Correct8. (why/ you / to the party/ didn\'t / come) Why didn\'t you come to the party? >> Correct9. (how/ the accident / did/ happen) How did the accident happen? >> Correct10. (why / this machine / doesn\'t / work) Why doesn\'t this machine work? >> CorrectI can\'t sure that this homework is correct or not.>> I am not sure if my homework is correct or not.Always thank you, Ms.Aurora! >> Thank you, Ms. [Name]!

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