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1.
I have ever been foold fooled on April Fool\'s Day by a girl.
I just knew a girl a little.
But she made a confession to me suddenly n April Fool\'s day.
I was embarrassed by her.
Bcause I didn\'t like her and I liked her friend and I was going to say no.
And she told me \'I\'m kidding!\' right now.
When I found out, a girl who I liked made her friend do that.
Because she did that to confirm my mind.
Ultimately, our relationship had become very far away.
2.
Many people make many pranks on April fool\'s day.
You can know so many pranks just by watching YouTube on April fool\'s day.
And they make many pranks minutely.
The most funny I have watched video is students leave in a school class when classes start.
Therefore teacher is embarrassed.
But people have to play tricks according to the situation.
There was a single example in Korea
On April Fool\'s Day, a celebrity made a joke about corona 19.
So he is still under fire.
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~Lucy
I have ever been foold fooled on April Fool\'s Day by a girl.
>>I have ever been fooled fooled on April Fool\'s Day by a girl.
I just knew a girl a little.
>>I just knew the girl a little.
But she made a confession to me suddenly n April Fool\'s day.
But she made a confession to me suddenly n April Fool\'s day.
>>But she made a confession to me suddenly on April Fool\'s day.
I was embarrassed by her.
>>CORRECT!
Bcause I didn\'t like her and I liked her friend and I was going to say no.
Bcause I didn\'t like her and I liked her friend and I was going to say no.
>>Because I didn\'t like her and I liked her friend and I was going to say no.
And she told me \'I\'m kidding!\' right now.
>>CORRECT!
When I found out, a girl who I liked made her friend do that.
When I found out, a girl who I liked made her friend do that.
>>CORRECT!
Because she did that to confirm my mind.
Because she did that to confirm my mind.
>>Because she did that to confirm my feelings.
Ultimately, our relationship had become very far away.
>>Ultimately, our relationship had become very awkward.
Many people make many pranks on April fool\'s day.
>>Many people make many pranks on April Fool\'s Day.
You can know so many pranks just by watching YouTube on April fool\'s day.
You can know so many pranks just by watching YouTube on April fool\'s day.
>>You can know so many pranks just by watching YouTube on April Fool\'s Day.
And they make many pranks minutely.
>>And they make many pranks every minute.
The most funny I have watched video is students leave in a school class when classes start.
The most funny I have watched video is students leave in a school class when classes start.
>>The most funny video I have watched is students leave a school classroom when classes start.
Therefore teacher is embarrassed.
>>Therefore, teacher is embarrassed.
But people have to play tricks according to the situation.
But people have to play tricks according to the situation.
>>CORRECT!
There was a single example in Korea
There was a single example in Korea
>>CORRECT!
On April Fool\'s Day, a celebrity made a joke about corona 19.
On April Fool\'s Day, a celebrity made a joke about corona 19.
>>CORRECT!
So he is still under fire.
So he is still under fire.
>>That\'s why he is still under fire.
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