Homework dear Glenda teacher

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

Thank you for sending this composition.

Go over the correction I made on your correction and analyze it. ;)

I will explain more of it in our class tomorrow.

See you! ^^

T. Glenda

Dear [Name] teacher
My korean name is keunwon kim, and my english name is [이름]. my korean age is 20, and my international age is 18.

>> My Korean name is Keunwon kim and my English name is [이름]. I am 20 years old in Korea but my international age is 18.

My hobbies are listening to music, doing exercise like soccer and lifting heavy things(weight training), studying english.

>> My hobbies are listening to music, doing exercises like soccer and weight training, I also study English during my free time.  

Physically, my height is 184cm. And my favorite color is black, because black clothes is suitable to me, it makes me slim.

>> I am 184cm tall and I like black color because it suits me well and it makes me look slim.

 I have been studying english for just 2 years, although i could learn about english in a lot of classes.

>> I have been studying English for 2 years, although I learn about English in a lot of classes.

I started studying english, because i really wanted to talk with foreign people.

>> I started studying English because I really wanted to talk to foreigners.

as teacher said, i am going to try to improve my english abilities without shyness!

>> As you have said, I will try to improve my English skills with confidence.

actually i have to practice writing too, i don\'t know where i have to put in sentences .(point) and ,(a comma) detailedly.

>>  Actually, I have to practice writing too. I don\'t know where I have to put period and the commas in a sentence.

so could you let me know about that? like... I like swimming (point? or comma?) because it is helpful.

>> So could you help me with that? Example is, I like swimming because it is helpful.

 i am not sure to put the point or comma between \'swimming\' and \'because\'.

>> I\'m not sure where to put a point or a comma between \'swimming and because\'.

thank you for reading my longgggg texts!!

>> Thank you for reading my long text.