Homework Dec 11th

2019-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think gardening is good for my health, although I don\'t like that. This is because it require physical activity. As it is tiring and hard to garden, it make me feel healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think gardening is good for my health, although I don\'t like that.

>> I think gardening is good for my health, although I don\'t like gardening.
This is because it require physical activity.

>> This is because it requires physical activity.
As it is tiring and hard to garden, it make me feel healthy.

>> It is tiring and it\'s hard to garden, but it makes me feel healthy.

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