Homework Dec 13th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The best thing that happened to me recently is when I won the game.

>> The best thing that happened to me recently is when I won a game.

(There was nothing special on me.)

>> There is nothing much special about me.
I like playing computer game named StarCraft.

>> I like playing the computer game named StarCraft.
It was hard to won this game.

>> It was hard to win at this game.