Homework Dec 16th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

If I had more free time, I would like to play computer game called Starcraft.

>> If I had more free time, I would like to play the computer game called Starcraft.
I want to get A rank in the game.

>> I want to get an \"A\" rank in this game.
It is very hard to get A rank, which means within in 8% of whole players in the game, so I would like to play a lot of computer game.
>> It is very hard to get an \"A\" rank, only 8% among all the players in this game have that rank, so I would like to play this game a lot.