Homework Dec 19th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My bad luck is when I played soccer with my colleagues.

>> My experience with bad luck was when I played soccer with my colleagues.
As soon as starting playing soccer, I ran into opponent goalkeeper and jumped to receive the ball with my head.

>> As soon as the game started, I ran into the opponent\'s goalkeeper and I jumped and received the ball with my head.
But when I touched my foot on the ground, my foot was twisted and was sick for a month

>> When I landed on the ground, my foot twisted and I was sick for a month.