Homework Dec 20th
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think that some chores that need to be done every day are cleaning the room, washing dishes.
>> I think that some chores that need to be done every day are cleaning my room and washing dishes.
Without cleaning the room, I would have respiratory disease because there would be bad air in my room.
>> Without cleaning my room, I would have respiratory disease because there would be bad air in my room.
Also, Without washing dishes, There would be none of dishes in the kitchen where I want to eat food.
>> Also, without washing the dishes, there would be no dishes in the kitchen where I could eat food.
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