Homework Dec 20th

2019-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I think that some chores that need to be done every day are cleaning the room, washing dishes. Without cleaning the room, I would have respiratory disease because there would be bad air in my room. Also, Without washing dishes, There would be none of dishes in the kitchen where I want to eat food.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think that some chores that need to be done every day are cleaning the room, washing dishes.

>>  I think that some chores that need to be done every day are cleaning my room and washing dishes.
Without cleaning the room, I would have respiratory disease because there would be bad air in my room.

>> Without cleaning my room, I would have respiratory disease because there would be bad air in my room.
Also, Without washing dishes, There would be none of dishes in the kitchen where I want to eat food.

>> Also, without washing the dishes, there would be no dishes in the kitchen where I could eat food.

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