Homework Dec 23th
학생이 쓴 원문
My afraid creatures are snakes
Snakes look strange because they have no legs.
Also, they are poisonous, So, I\'m afraid of snakes.
강사 첨삭
Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
My afraid creatures are snakes
>> The creature I\'m afraid of is snakes.
Snakes look strange because they have no legs.
>> CORRECT!
Also, they are poisonous, So, I\'m afraid of snakes.
>> Also, they are poisonous, so I\'m afraid of snakes.
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