Homework Dec 6th

2019-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think the way to maintain a good friendship is to contact my friends frequently. This gives my friends continuous effects to remind me. When I call my friends or send text messages, contents include that what they do today and how they feel. By doing this, they feel friendly for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think the way to maintain a good friendship is to contact my friends frequently.

>> CORRECT!
This gives my friends continuous effects to remind me.

>> This gives my friends a constant reminder that I remember them.
When I call my friends or send text messages, contents include that what they do today and how they feel.

>> When I call my friends or send text messages, I ask them how they are and what they have been up to.
By doing this, they feel friendly for me.

>> By doing this, they will feel that they are my friends.

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