homework December 18th

2018-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. of his own free will He overcame the physical difficulty of his own free will. 2. of his own accord They solved the problem in consequence of that they had tried to make a join effort of their own accord. 3. voluntary Most charities need voluntary workers when holding some events or carring out relief works. 4. caught my attention The beautiful sceneries of the countryside caught my attention. 5. numerous Numerous people have traveled abroad to enjoy their time during a national holiday such as Chuseok.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. of his own free will
He overcame the physical difficulty of his own free will.

>> or: He overcame his physical difficulty of his own free will.

2. of his own accord
They solved the problem in consequence of that they had tried to make a join effort of their own accord.

>> They made a joint effort of their own accord and as a result, they managed to solve the problem.

3. voluntary
Most charities need voluntary workers when holding some events or carring out relief works.

>> Most charities need voluntary workers when holding some events or carrying out relief works.

4. caught my attention
The beautiful sceneries of the countryside caught my attention.
> correct

5. numerous
Numerous people have traveled abroad to enjoy their time during a national holiday such as Chuseok.

>> Numerous people travel abroad to enjoy their time during national holidays such as Chuseok.

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