homework December 19th

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. underlying The underlying problem of high rate of unemployment is not the lack of workplace but the matter of social recognition. For instance, people distinguish high quality jobs from low ones and avoid low level works even though they don't have a job. 2. hungry / hunger I always hungry after waking up in the morning. The hunger of kids is one of the most urgent matters that should be sorted out. 3. aroma Stimulating aroma caught my attention when I walked along the trail. 4. seek advice When people set up their own business, they generally seek advice from experienced ones in the field. 5. voluntary contribution Most Koreans join a voluntary contribution which gather gold to overcome IMF.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^



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Cheers!
Jean 



1. underlying
The underlying problem of high rate of unemployment is not the lack of workplace but the matter of social recognition. For instance, people distinguish high quality jobs from low ones and avoid low level works even though they don\'t have a job.
>> The underlying cause of high unemployment rate is not the lack of available jobs but a matter of personal bias. For instance, people distinguish high quality jobs from low ones, and avoid the latter even though they don\'t have work.


 2. hungry / hunger
I always hungry after waking up in the morning. 

>> I\'m always hungry when I wake up in the morning.

 The hunger of kids is one of the most urgent matters that should be sorted out. 

>> correct

 3. aroma
Stimulating aroma caught my attention when I walked along the trail. 

>> The stimulating aroma caught my attention when I walked along the trail.

 4. seek advice
When people set up their own business, they generally seek advice from experienced ones in the field.

>> correct

 5. voluntary contribution
Most Koreans join a voluntary contribution which gather gold to overcome IMF.

>> Most Koreans gave a voluntary contribution, which gathered gold, to overcome the IMF crisis.

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