Homework: Describe a place you like to eat at
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I have a few favorite restaurants in Seoul.
>> Correct
Whenever I have spare time, I used to visit there.
>> Whenever I have spare time, I visit there.
In this essay, I will talk about one of them and introduce foods which are served from the restaurant.
>> In this essay, I will talk about one of my favorite restaurants and introduce the food that it serves.
First of all, the name of this restaurant is the “Canucks” in Iteawon.
>> First of all, the name of this restaurant is “Canucks” and it is in Iteawon.
It serves Canadian style foods and drinks.
>> It serves Canadian style food and drinks.
In addition, their atmosphere and interior look like real Canadian styles.
>> In addition, the ambience and interior look like real Canadian style.
So, When I get there, I feel like travelling abroad.
>> When I go there, I feel like I\'m travelling abroad.
Secondly, I will introduce their best menus.
>> Secondly, I will introduce their best dishes.
even though they provide several foods, I think that the roasted chicken with honey source is the best one.
>> Even though they offer a lot of options, I think that the roasted chicken with honey sauce is the best one.
This taste is sweet and delicious, and I never have tasted like this styles.
>> It is sweet and delicious at the same time and I have never tasted anything like it.
It is the best reason why I like this restaurant.
>> It is the main reason why I like this restaurant.
If you get a chance to visit Korea or Iteawon, I suggest that Iteawon is one of the best choices.
>> If you get a chance to visit Korea or Iteawon, I suggest you do so.
Because there are also many stores and restaurants, so you can feel unique and special.
>> This is because there are many unique and special stores and restaurants.
The “Canucks” is also one the popular places in Iteawon.
>> “Canucks” is one of the popular places in Iteawon.
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