Homework: Describe a place you like to eat at

2018-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I have a few favorite restaurants in Seoul. Whenever I have spare time, I used to visit there. In this essay, I will talk about one of them and introduce foods which are served from the restaurant. First of all, the name of this restaurant is the “Canucks” in Iteawon. It serves Canadian style foods and drinks. In addition, their atmosphere and interior look like real Canadian styles. So, When I get there, I feel like travelling abroad. Secondly, I will introduce their best menus. even though they provide several foods, I think that the roasted chicken with honey source is the best one. This taste is sweet and delicious, and I never have tasted like this styles. It is the best reason why I like this restaurant. If you get a chance to visit Korea or Iteawon, I suggest that Iteawon is one of the best choices. Because there are also many stores and restaurants, so you can feel unique and special. The “Canucks” is also one the popular places in Iteawon.

강사 첨삭

Hi Allen!

I think you are already giving it your all for your upcoming exams.

Don\'t stress out too much.^^

Keep practicing!

I know you\'ll get where you need to be.

~~ Teacher Sharon

I have a few favorite restaurants in Seoul.

>> Correct
Whenever I have spare time, I used to visit there.

>> Whenever I have spare time, I visit there.
In this essay, I will talk about one of them and introduce foods which are served from the restaurant.

>> In this essay, I will talk about one of my favorite restaurants and introduce the food that it serves.
First of all, the name of this restaurant is the “Canucks” in Iteawon.

>> First of all, the name of this restaurant is “Canucks” and it is in Iteawon.
It serves Canadian style foods and drinks.

>> It serves Canadian style food and drinks.
In addition, their atmosphere and interior look like real Canadian styles.

>> In addition, the ambience and interior look like real Canadian style.
 So, When I get there, I feel like travelling abroad.

>> When I go there, I feel like I\'m travelling abroad.
Secondly, I will introduce their best menus.

>> Secondly, I will introduce their best dishes.
even though they provide several foods, I think that the roasted chicken with honey source is the best one.

>> Even though they offer a lot of options, I think that the roasted chicken with honey sauce is the best one.
This taste is sweet and delicious, and I never have tasted like this styles.

>> It is sweet and delicious at the same time and I have never tasted anything like it.
 It is the best reason why I like this restaurant.

>> It is the main reason why I like this restaurant.
If you get a chance to visit Korea or Iteawon, I suggest that Iteawon is one of the best choices.

>> If you get a chance to visit Korea or Iteawon, I suggest you do so.
Because there are also many stores and restaurants, so you can feel unique and special.

>> This is because there are many unique and special stores and restaurants.
 The “Canucks” is also one the popular places in Iteawon.

>> “Canucks” is one of the popular places in Iteawon.

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