Homework. Describe my holiday with adjective.
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Hi Lion! How\'s your day?
Your adjectives are correct. Good job!
I just wish you had a much better holiday. :)
Please check the grammar revisions I made for future reference.
See you!
Amanda ^-^
mundane: My holiday is mundane. Because, I worked at company as normal.
>> My holiday was mundane because I still went to work.
tired: I was tired. you know why. yes I had worked.
>> I was tired and you know why. I still had to work during holidays.
boring: My friend visited their family. so I have no one to hang out with.
>> My friends visited their families, so I have no one to hang out with.
free: Bus, subway is very free. Not many people was in the transport. Because people enjoyed their holiday.
>> Many people were on vacation enjoying the long holiday that\'s why buses and the subway were not crowded.
exciting: I went to norae-bang(karaoke). I sang rap-song. so I was exciting.
>> I went to norae-bang (karaoke). I sung rap songs which has been really exciting.
>> OR: I went to a karaoke bar and sung rap songs which was really exciting.
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