Homework. Describe my holiday with adjective.

2017-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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mundane: My holiday is mundane. Because, I worked at company as normal. tired: I was tired. you know why. yes I had worked. boring: My friend visited their family. so I have no one to hang out with. free: Bus, subway is very free. Not many people was in the transport. Because people enjoyed their holiday. exciting: I went to norae-bang(karaoke). I sang rap-song. so I was exciting.

강사 첨삭


Hi Lion! How\'s your day?

Your adjectives are correct. Good job!

I just wish you had a much better holiday. :)

Please check the grammar revisions I made for future reference.

See you!

Amanda ^-^



mundane: My holiday is mundane. Because, I worked at company as normal.

>> My holiday was mundane because I still went to work.

tired: I was tired. you know why. yes I had worked.
>> I was tired and you know why. I still had to work during holidays.


boring: My friend visited their family. so I have no one to hang out with.
>> My friends visited their families, so I have no one to hang out with.


free: Bus, subway is very free. Not many people was in the transport. Because people enjoyed their holiday.
>> Many people were on vacation enjoying the long holiday that\'s why buses and the subway were not crowded.  


exciting: I went to norae-bang(karaoke). I sang rap-song. so I was exciting.

>> I went to norae-bang (karaoke). I sung rap songs which has been really exciting.

>> OR: I went to a karaoke bar and sung rap songs which was really exciting.

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