HOMEWORK: Describe the best holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
My best holiday is New Year\'s Day three years ago.
Because It was a holiday after passing an entrance exam. I was so happy and feel free that day.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julie!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Indeed, New Year is the best holiday!^^
New year means new plans, new achievements and new opportunities.
It is not the day itself for me, but the fact that we are welco[이름]g the new year with positive vibes. :)
Teacher Andrea
My best holiday is New Year\'s Day three years ago.
>> Correct
Because It was a holiday after passing an entrance exam.
>> It was the holiday after me passing the entrance exam.
I was so happy and feel free that day
>> I was so happy and felt free that day.
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