Homework : Describe the best party that you have been to. Why was it the best?

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Even though I attended several great parties,

>> I have attended several great parties in my life.
In this essay, I will describe my best party and talk about the reason why I like it.

>> Even if that\'s the case, I will describe the best party for me and give the reason why I have enjoyed it so much.
First of all, the best in my memory is a first birthday party for my son.

>> The best memory I have is the first birthday party of my son.
When the day was almost coming, I planned a big party to celebrate the first birthday in a traditional restaurant.

>> Correct
At this party, I introduced his one year life showing our photographs.

>> During the party, I showed one year of my son\'s life through photographs.
 In addition, I talked about him with parents and relatives.

>> Correct
It touched my emotion and I was so impressed.

>> Correct
There are several reasons why I was impressed.

>> Correct
First, Many events that I did with my son was passed over in my mind.

>> First, many special events I had shared with my son came to mind.
It makes me happy so far.

>> It made me really happy.
Second, the special performance was so interesting.

>> Correct
This performance was that my son would select one of several objects.

>> This was when my son selected one of several objects.
For example, balls, pens, a thread respectively symbolize being sports player, becoming a scholar and living a long life.

>> Those objects included balls, pens, a piece of thread respectively symbolizing being an athlete, becoming a scholar and living a long life.
Even though My son chose a thread, I was so happy whatever he selected.

>> Even though my son chose the thread, I would have been happy with whatever he selected.