(Homework)Describe your dream place to live. Why would you want to live there? What would you do?
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I don\'t care about suroundings. I can live in anywhere which is silent or loud.
It means that I can stay at the country or a city.
I just dream of a \'detached house\' where contain a little garden, parking lot, upstairs rooms, and an alttic.
The alttic is most important point for me to choose my dream house.
In alttic, I will play a guitar or a piano and sing a song with my children.
When night falls, We will watch the blue sky with the twingkle stars.
It\'s fantastic!
Anyway, it\'s nice to play in a little garden too. my future wife and children may like it more than me.
I like too, but I don\'t like a dog. So, althought they say me to buy a dog, I will not approve their requirement.
But, if my child really wants, I will buy unwillingly...:(
It will be happy.
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-Teacher Jedah
I don\'t care about suroundings.
>>I don\'t actually care about my surroundings.
I can live in anywhere which is silent or loud.
>>I can live anywhere, whether it\'s a noisy or quiet environment.
It means that I can stay at the country or a city.
It means that I can stay at the country or a city.
>>It means that I can live either in the urban or rural area.
I just dream of a \'detached house\' where contain a little garden, parking lot, upstairs rooms, and an alttic.
I just dream of a \'detached house\' where contain a little garden, parking lot, upstairs rooms, and an alttic.
>>I just dream of a \"detached house\" where it has a tiny garden, a parking lot, upstairs rooms and an attic.
The alttic is most important point for me to choose my dream house.
The alttic is most important point for me to choose my dream house.
>>A house having an attic is the most important point for me.
In alttic, I will play a guitar or a piano and sing a song with my children.
In alttic, I will play a guitar or a piano and sing a song with my children.
>>In the attic, I will play a guitar or a piano and sing songs with my children.
When night falls, We will watch the blue sky with the twingkle stars.
When night falls, We will watch the blue sky with the twingkle stars.
>>When night falls, we will look at the night sky and the twinkling stars.
It\'s fantastic!
It\'s fantastic!
>>Correct
Anyway, it\'s nice to play in a little garden too. my future wife and children may like it more than me.
Anyway, it\'s nice to play in a little garden too. my future wife and children may like it more than me.
>>Also, it\'s nice to play in a little garden too.
My future wife and children may like it more than me.
>>Correct
I like too, but I don\'t like a dog.
I like too, but I don\'t like a dog.
>>I like it too, but I don\'t like to have a dog.
So, althought they say me to buy a dog, I will not approve their requirement.
>>So, even if they will ask me to buy a dog, I will not approve of their request.
But, if my child really wants, I will buy unwillingly...:(
But, if my child really wants, I will buy unwillingly...:(
>>Correct
It will be happy.
It will be happy.
>>Correct
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