homework(Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.)

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I like my workplace.

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 I work in university.

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 our campus is large and there are many trees and flowers.

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 when I enter my school I smell grass.

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It is like that I am in my hometown.

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especially in april there are many cherry-blossom trees.

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 the trees make a tunnel from entrance to gym.

>>the trees make a tunnel from the entrance to the gym.

It is so amazing.

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 in our campus there are university students.

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when I see them I feel like them. and I think about my school year. I was a armed forces nursing shool stuent.

>>When I see them, I feel like I am like the, so it makes me remember my school days when I was an armed forces nursing school student.

so I had to wear uniform and I had a many limitation. s

>>Thus I had to wear a uniform and had many limitations.

so when I see students, I envy them.

>>I envy those students.
 I like my workplace where has trees and young people.

>>I like my workplace because of the young students and the environment.