Homework(difficult change)

Hi [이름]! We almost have the same principles in life. But believe in yourself that no matter how hard life is,

you have to keep going. And I hope that you would be fully recovered. ^^

~~May~~

People have many dreams when they are young.

>> People have many dreams even when they were young.

But as time goes by, we can learn that dreams don\'t just happen.

>> CORRECT

OR >> But as time goes by, we realize that dreams don\'t just happen.

To come true our dream, It takes many efforts, or it has to go through hard time.

>> To make our dreams come true, we should be determined and make an effort .

We also pray with all our efforts and earnestness to overcome the difficult times. Because it\'s a difficult change in our lives.

>> We also pray that all our efforts and earnestness will overcome our difficulties because there might be a difficult change in our lives.

Moreover, it is important to change our mind in such hard situations.

>> Moreover, it is important to change our mind in such difficult times.

In case of me, my favorite phrase is \"To be happier, we should always laugh because we know the value and value of life without being tied to the situation.\"

>> My motto is \"To be happier, we should always have fun because we know its value and the value of life without being tied to the situation.\"

so I don\'t give up even in difficult situations.

>> CORRECT

For example, In the past I had to give up study English in a foreign country When I lost my health.

>> Like in the past, I had to give up my English studies in a foreign country because of my health.

My dream changed, and I had to make difficult change.

>> My dream had changed and I had to make difficult change.

and I still remember exercising early in the morning and evening to overcome the situation after I came back Korea.

>> And I still remember exercising early in the morning and evening to overcome the situation after I came back to Korea.

I have to go forward, just as spring comes if it survives the cold winter~.

>> I have to move forward, just as spring comes to surpass from a cold winter.