Homework : Do you agree with the idea that "Life is like a dream"?

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There are mixed opinions on how to enjoy our lives.

>> Correct
Some people insist that we should stop an ambiguous dreaming and have to face reality.

>> Some people insist that we should stop focusing on ambiguous dreams and start facing reality.
However, I believe that we must have dreams so that we can enjoy more joyful lives.

>> However, I believe that we must have dreams so that we can lead more joyful lives. 
In this essay, I will elaborate about advantages of having dreams.

>> In this essay, I will elaborate on the advantages of having dreams.
First of all, having dreams would give purpose of lives.

>> First of all, having dreams would give purpose in our lives.
All of the people do something to achieve their dreams.

>> All people do something to achieve their dreams.
In addition, they have made great achievements.

>> In addition, they have great achievements.
If they don’t have any dream, we couldn’t make those.

>>  If they don’t have any dream, they can\'t achieve anything.
Finally, I agree with the idea that “Life is like a dream”.

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However, the dream must be clear.

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There might be no meaning without clearance.

>> There might be no meaning without clarity.