HOMEWORK: Do you celebrate Christmas in your country? Do you decorate the outside of your house for

2019-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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We usually celebrate Christmas with couples in my country. Originally, we didn\'t decorate the outside of my house for Christmas. But this Christmas, my mom bought LED tree. So, our family decorated the window with it. I think it looks better than before.

강사 첨삭

Hello Julia! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

We usually celebrate Christmas with couples in my country.
>> Here in Korea, Christmas is usually being celebrated by couples.

Originally, we didn\'t decorate the outside of my house for Christmas.
>> We don\'t decorate the outside of our houses for Christmas.

But this Christmas, my mom bought LED tree.
>> But for this Christmas, my mom bought some LED lights.

So, our family decorated the window with it.
>> So, our family decorated the windows with it.

I think it looks better than before.
>> CORRECT!

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