HOMEWORK: Do you get annoyed when other people display bad manners? Give some examples.

2019-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I get annoyed when children kick my chair in the movie theater. They keep me out of focus on the movie. And I also get annoyed when other people answer the phone loudly on the subway or bus or talk down to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Julia! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I get annoyed when children kick my chair in the movie theater.
>> I get annoyed whenever children kick my chair in the movie theater.

They keep me out of focus on the movie.
>> CORRECT!

And I also get annoyed when other people answer the phone loudly on the subway or bus or talk down to me.
>> And I also get annoyed when other people answer the phone loudly on the subway or bus, and also when people talk down to me.

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