Homework: Do you like meeting new people?

2020-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

They say that it is not easy to meet new and unfamiliar people. It is true to me, but I am a type of person who rather enjoys meeting new people. This is because I can learn from new people about new culture and can have an indirect experience. I try to break ice by bringing up some topics that seem we are commonly interested in. I think sports are good for such topics for man and food is a good [이름]ce for woman. TV Drama is another good topic but I am not good at it. One thing we need to avoid is a political issue which has a potential to make us quarrel.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

I appreciate your sending your homework! Catch you in class tomorrow!

Cheers,
Jean~~
They say that it is not easy to meet new and unfamiliar people.
>> OR: Some say that it can be challenging and even unpleasant to meet people you don\'t know and are unfamiliar with. 

It is true to me, but I am a type of person who rather enjoys meeting new people.
>> OR: This applies to me, but I am the kind of person who rather enjoys meeting new people. 

This is because I can learn from new people about new culture and can have an indirect experience.
>> OR: This is because I can learn from new people about other cultures and can have an indirect experience.

I try to break ice by bringing up some topics that seem we are commonly interested in.
>> OR: I try to break the ice by bringing up some conversation pieces that we are both seemingly interested in.  

I think sports are good for such topics for man and food is a good [이름]ce for woman.
>> If you ask me, sports are good conversation topics for men and food is a good [이름]ce for women.

TV Drama is another good topic but I am not good at it.
>> TV Drama is another subject that people might find interesting, although I have to admit that I\'m not that familiar with it. 

One thing we need to avoid is a political issue which has a potential to make us quarrel.
>> OR: One talking point we need to avoid when we first meet someone in a professional setting is a political issue which has a potential to cause disagreements or misunderstandings. 

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