Homework : Do you think gardening is good for your health?

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There are different opinions about how much gardening influences our health.

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Although some people might say that gardening has no health effect, my opinion is different that there is definitely positive effects if people take care of their garden.

>>  Although some people might say that gardening has no effects on health, my opinion is different in that there are definitely positive effects if people take care of their garden.
In this essay, I will talk about these effects and elaborate my opinions.

>>  In this essay, I will talk about these effects and elaborate on my opinions.
Firstly, Improving health doesn’t mean enhancing only physical status but also mental.

>> Firstly, improving health doesn’t mean enhancing only the physical state but also the mental state.
For example, people who have been gardening usually have clear minds.

>>  For example, people who tend to gardens can usually think clearly.
This is because they are satisfied when they see their well-grown plants and trees.

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According to researches, It influences positively their health by this satisfaction.

>> According to researches, this kind of satisfaction influences their health in a positive way.
Furthermore, to take care of a garden also has physical effects.

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Gardening demands little workload such as sensitive hand activities and soft exercise.

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For example, they have to cut their bushes and trees and bend their knees and waist.

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As a result, people already enjoy gardening as one of the popular efficient exercises by these effects.

>> As a result, people already enjoy gardening as one of the popular and efficient exercises because of these effects.