Homework : Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor?

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I think that a sense of humor is one of the most important abilities.

>> I think that having a sense of humor is one of the most important qualities of a person.
To explain this phenomenon, I should talk about many reasons.

>> To explain this statement, I want to give several reasons.
So, In this essay, I will discuss about these reasons and my opinion.

>> So, in this essay, I will discuss these reasons and give my opinion.
First of all, the humor makes people feel comfortable.

>> First of all, humor makes people feel comfortable.
Sometimes this skill would significantly influence the success of the business.

>> Sometimes, this skill would significantly influence the success of businesses.
According to a lot of researches, people who has a sense of humor usually earn more money.

>> According to research, people who have a sense of humor usually earn more money.
This is one of the most representative examples that show how much important the humor is.

>> This is a perfect example to show how important humor is.
Secondly, It might positively affect to relationships with people.

>> Secondly, it has positive effects on relationships with people.
When people meet other at first, the humor might help their ice breaking.

>> When people meet for the first time, humor might help in breaking the ice.
It might be a good chance to close each other and improve connections with people.

>> It might be a good chance to be close to one another and strengthen connections with people.
To sum it up, a sense of humor has many positive effects on many categories such as business and personal relationship.

>> Correct
There are no doubt that we can\'t deny these effects.

>> There is no doubt regarding these effects.