HOMEWORK: Do you think pets need holidays? What kinds of holidays would we have for pets?

2019-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Pets usually wait their owners until they get home from work. So, I think we have to make a holiday for people who raise pets. And on that day, owners don\'t have to go to their works, and they should play with their pets. In other words, I think pets don\'t need holidays but people who raise pets need holidays. Maybe in Korea, we don\'t have holidays for pets. But in U.S, they have National Take Your Cat to the Vet Day and Happy Mew Year for Cats Day for cats. And they have National Golden Retriever Day and National Bulldogs Are Beautiful Day for dogs.

강사 첨삭

Hello Julia! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

Pets usually wait their owners until they get home from work.
>> Pets usually wait for their owners to come home from work.

So, I think we have to make a holiday for people who raise pets.
>> CORRECT!

And on that day, owners don\'t have to go to their works, and they should play with their pets.
>> And on that day, pet owners don\'t have to go to work, and they should play with their pets.

In other words, I think pets don\'t need holidays but people who raise pets need holidays.
>> In other words, I think pets don\'t need holidays but people who raise them do.

Maybe in Korea, we don\'t have holidays for pets.
>> CORRECT!

But in U.S, they have National Take Your Cat to the Vet Day and Happy Mew Year for Cats Day for cats.
>> But in U.S, they have National Take Your Cat to the Vet Day and Happy Mew Year for Cats Day, but these holidays are only for cats.

And they have National Golden Retriever Day and National Bulldogs Are Beautiful Day for dogs.
>> And they have National Golden Retriever Day and National Bulldogs Are Beautiful Day for dogs too.

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