Homework : Do you think that capital punishment is a good idea?

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Capital punishment has been a serious issue in the world.

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There are several opinions on the punishment.

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In this essay, I will talk about both opinions and explain my opinion.

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First of all, some people agree with capital punishment.

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According to researches, this strong policy has certain effects that might prevent crimes.

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 Furthermore, reoffending can be perfectly avoided by the law.

> Furthermore, this can definitely prevent repeat offenses.
For these reasons, some countries allow specific criminals the death penalty.

>>  For these reasons, some countries allow specific criminals to suffer the death penalty.
Secondly, other people disagree with capital punishment.

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They insist that all lives should be protected without any exceptions even if they are murders.

>> They insist that all lives should be protected without any exceptions even if they are murderers.
In addition, they believe that some criminals will reform new men under.

>>  In addition, they believe that some criminals can undergo reformation.
This idea would make our society hopeful.

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In my opinion, it is better for the punishment to be allowed under strict rules.

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For example, a criminal who kill someone more than twice should face the death penalty.

>>  For example, a criminal who kills two or more people should face the death penalty.
Even though this judgement might be difficult, this is the reason why every court exists.

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