Homework: Do you think you are healthy? Why do you say so?
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I used to think I was healthy before I started my on-line shopping business. I used to exercise everyday maybe more than necessary. I think I was kind of addicted to working out. But since I have two jobs, I really lack in my spare time, so nowadays I just exercise maybe once a week or less. sigh. I need to start squat again if I want to fully enjoy skiing this winter, because it really require good muscle strength in thigh. But I\'m
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Hi, Min! The overall
content of your work is comprehensible. Good job! Just please don’t forget to
double-check your spelling.
- Debbie
>> I used to think I was healthy before I started my online shopping business.
I used to exercise everyday maybe more than necessary.
>> I used to exercise every day maybe more than necessary.
I think I was kind of addicted to working out.
>> This is a good sentence.
But since I have two jobs, I really lack in my spare time, so nowadays I just exercise maybe once a week or less. sigh.
>> But since I have two jobs, I really lack spare time, so nowadays I just exercise maybe once a week.
I need to start squat again if I want to fully enjoy skiing this winter, because it really require good muscle strength in thigh. But I\'m
>> I need to start squatting again if I want to fully enjoy skiing this winter because it really requires good muscle strength in the thighs.
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